3.11.2011

The Ups and Downs.

After that rough draft, I went down another track until an idea to do a sonnet hit me.

So, the second draft:

Compelled by love
is a river of gold,
alive and moving of its own accord
carrying us, pushing us to shores
we would never have gone by
by ourselves.
Imagine -
in arms that breathe and speak,
a million stars in one droplet,
drawn in by something we crave
something we spend all our lives looking for
only to give it away.


And the final Sectionals draft. I forgot to title it. I think I did a sonnet because writing free verse for Fine Arts is pretty much suicidal, in a literary sense.

Before me lies a fork within the road
Follow your heart became my childhood theme
Enforced by Big Bird, Blue's Clues, Frog and Toad.
Follow the money: family who seem
To care wish for me everything they lacked,
But I have seen no joy for all their years
Of wringing dollars from each day. They stacked
Their principles on poverty and tears.
I have a greater purpose than success
My eyes can see a higher road that leads
Into a kingdom girded by duress
And, promising no leisure, fills my needs.
All I've ever looked for I have found
Following God's love to higher ground.

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